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Highlights from a Candlelight by ~belldandysama:iconbelldandysama:



Highlights from a Candlelight

I sit alone in the dark
illuminated by a candle light
Radiating a soft glow
in yet another cold night
With just enough spark
Your eyes dance and burn
I run my fingers down your face
And your warmth I slowly earn

To talk to you is all I ask
Seeing you smile is my wish
But I know I have to sit and wait
To taste that tender bliss
In this life I continue to live
You are my only reason
The moonlight amidst the dark sky
You are the root of my passion

Your love, I guess, wasn't meant for me
But forever to you I shall return
For you showed me love so true
You washed away the sins I earned
Just one more time, I touch your face
A picture, an image so still
I'm thankful of the smile which now I trace
For your beauty is the only thing that's real
©2005-2009 ~belldandysama
:iconbelldandysama:

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Self explanatory. ^^

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:iconmitchsquirrelyguy:
I like the message, but I don't know about the rhyme scheme

--
As you journey through life take a minute every now and then to give a thought for the other fellow. He could be plotting something.
Hagar the Horrible

The older I grow, the less important the comma becomes. Let the reader catch his own breath.
:iconbelldandysama:
hmm, different people have different tastes i guess. I like it ^^

Thanks <3

--
No one dies a virgin, life screws everyone
:iconnurikane:
A lot of poets nowadays do not really rely on rhyme scheme. I used to 7 years ago. But, I quit depending on it since I edited most of my poems.

Anyway, your poem in my interpretation, means about young love, sweet love.

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"Blessed be the Lord my strength, which teach my hands to war, and my fingers to fight." --- Psalm 144:1

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